Wednesday, October 24, 2012

We are still improving our scary stories!

    Today in class we learned another way to improve creative writings. As we copied our stories, we made additions and deletions to our first drafts. Some students made so many changes, their new draft is almost totally different from their first draft. That is fine! We underlined all the changes, all the new stuff, in our second drafts. Each student should have added at least one sentence of narrative and one or two of dialogue to the second draft.

You may work on this tonight at home if you'd like, but it does not have to be completed tonight. We will be working on this again tomorrow in class.

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